Love Metal Ch 2 pg 48

Yeah, so I'm really unhappy with how these last two pages turned out. Mostly because they're poorly written. I've had a number of people ask why the hell his parents act like that and how unrealistic they appear, and my God are they right! I know exactly in my head how his parents think, so to me this seems like a logical thing to happen, but sometimes I forget that the readers can only see what I put down on paper, you can't read my mind.
Eventually it hit me, that the fact that I have to explain this instead of letting the comic do it for me is a huge sign of poor writing. SO, I'm going to rewrite and redraw Dante's past parent issues in a way that they appear a little more realistic so everyone can better understand their way of thinking. 

The fact that such an important part of my story came off as an "after thought" honestly pisses me off to no end, so I'm all fired up to do this!